Even at this late stage
Ploughing through the long stretch of age
she is still a ravishing rage
I wonder surrender to her debonair delight.
with those fleshy downcast eyes
coquettish sweet demeanour
slim sleek shy sweet
the stunning glance
enticing
me to amble on for a
passionate possessive sizzling
dance
to the rhythm of the
whistling winds.
skidding
the stone steps in the small garden
on to the seashore
holding
my hand in her hand firmly
we take a deep
plunge into the expansive
waters
the frothy turbulent waves
gushing lapping up to our
necks.
The tempestuous tides engulfing us
into
its stormy bosom
and in a flash
toss us to the distant
shores
tired and torpid
she
dozed off to sweet slumber
resting
her head on my shoulder
I
stare at her flushy
cheeks
the water dripping profusely
down
her delightfully beautiful
face
glistening in the intense sunlight
I caressed her passionately
in warm embrace
ploughing through the long stretch of
age
she is really a ravishing rage.
Very nice poem in a very romantic style with deep poetic vocabulary.
Really enjoyable and meaningful poem.
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Thanks Shaji. you read my stuff and like it as well. Thanks again
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The poem is a ‘Shelley’ like expression of deep , tempestuous relationship feelings .In hindsight I feel you should have been a litterateaur than a Marketeers/ Manager …..
….. Bhushan
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very well said , your comments after a long interlude are refreshing and rejuvenating one. Thanks.
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Frankly speaking Sir, I had to google for some words for its meaning. You are master in English writing. Please share some tips to improve my writing skills.
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amen your greatness to praise my diction.Thanks.
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Posted a new poem in Hindi. Plz have a glance over it
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sure sirji.
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Don’t embarrass me by saying Sir😏
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Superb I loved reading it
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AMEEN
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Superbly written enjoyed every bit of it
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very true
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