I walk through my dreams
by the purring streams
ravishing dandelions
delightful daffodils
emitting the fragrance
entrapping
mesmerizing me
to soulful slumber
I walk through the rustling trees
Marvel at bewitching
beauty
memories scowl with the gusty
breeze
cautiously I hop
to scale the mountain top
gaze around the valley
in astonishing
ecstasy
I walk through my dreams
By the purring streams
I see her in dark velvet attire
skirting the glistening lagoons
with her coquettish wink
and intoxicating drink
our bodies stretch and merge
in a tight hug
.
we tumble scramble
down the green slope
drowning in the ocean
of her eyes
I breath into her throbbing
heart
drenched and lost
in blissful passion.
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Greater soothing choice of words Sir!
memories scowl with the gusty breeze
This line was fresh, and stood out for me!
Beautiful!
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Very well said Thanks . God bless you
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That flow, those words, an excellent one 🙂
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very thanks to you for your candid comments,
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Very good poem with dream sequence .it is pleasure to read your poems.
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Thanks very much
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Poetry of immense pleasure metaphor thoughts weaved like velvet .
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Glad you liked it sirji.
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Sir again a very good poem and from the core of heart. Excellent words of poetic version have been used with deep meanings. As usual enjoyed the poem.
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Thanks sirji. you enjoy reading poems especially the ones i pen down
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Great
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Ameen
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Awesome poem, Brij! Oh, that the dream was mine!!!
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Thanks Jerri for your grand comment.
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Lovely poetry. The flow of the words is so dreamy!
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very thoughtful comment .You are very great. Thanks
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You’re most welcome!
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yes pl. Thanks
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Wow …….. very beautiful Poetry …… As usual I enjoyed your poem.
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Thanks sirji. you are mastermind.
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ha ha ha……Thanks again.
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welcome
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A very good poem with the best choice of words. I never thought i’d enjoy reading poem as much as i read yours.
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Thanks Nadya that is nice of you.
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very sensual – nicely done
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THANKS SIR YOU ARE WONDERFUL
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Once you start reading this poem, you just go with the flow of words. Very beautifully penned sir. 🙂
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Thanks for your comment finally.
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