I can behold the murky
Melancholy evening
Dark clouds looming dooming
Over Jammu horizons
She lay there on the bed
turning scratching
her head
Panting gasping
for breath
like a wounded bird
Breathing in and out
Without a whimper
or a word
Fingers wriggling
Limbs flailing
eyes vacant
Tears frozen
I stand in anger
and remorse
The lightening struck
The soul wafted from her body
And she lay
still serene
in
eternal peace
I kissed her forehead
Brown
my tears moisten
and rolled down.
The curtain fell
And I watched
the flames leaping
wrapping her fragile
body .
she vanished into blissful
heaven
Leaving me to gather
her remnants to be
immersed in the waters
Of Holy Ganges.
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One more poem with great feeling. NICE.
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very true thanks
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Vrry besutiful emotional poem in remembrance of Nichi. Very sad saga difficult to forget and believe.
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Glad to see you liked it
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Sir the poem is really very emotional and full of soul. Actual happening and feelings have been nicely put in a poetic form. It is a true shape of life
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Glad to know you liked it very much. I try to make things to be seen rather read only.
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Heart touching. We will miss our dear sister.
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Sisters are loving ones boon from God and i love my all sisters
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very touching and sorrowful
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thanks. yes very sad story
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Very emotional I read it in silence
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Glad you liked it .Thanks for visiting my blog.
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Welcome
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AMEN
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Yes this was that beautiful peom with lots of emotion, which is written very well. You sir are an excellent writer. I couldn’t help sharing this one with my co-worker.
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very great of you madame .God bless you
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hope it didn’t really happen though.
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yes it happened my younger sister expired in this condition.
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Seriously!
well i do hope writing these poems help u release
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Amen
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Nothing could have been a better tribute to my aunt than this.I feel your pain and sorrow in each and every word.
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glad you finally read my poems
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