The Moon looks pale and gloom
Forewarning of some awful doom
You sulk shudder so deep
The waves gurgle and leap
Into an enormous tide
So angry and wide
The earth beneath quakes
Engulfing the embankments
with sea storm.
Women men children in deep slumber
Are torn apart in a desert
Of corpses .
Just in a flicker of moment
The town reduced to a shambles.
The weeping wailing rent the air
The pale moon hiding behind the clouds
Whispering “I felt the doom and gloom
Of Tsunami Tsunami.”
Appreciable poetic composition of Nature and its Power.
Sir, we wait for your Esteemed blogs with all curiosity.
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Thank you sirji. you are awesome.
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Nature and time can’t be overpowered by any power known in human world.I like the title The Gloomy Moon.The tragedy and the pain with powerlessness to do anything against it,so beautifully narrated in every prose.
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Thanx for your great understanding of poetry.
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Beautiful imagery. 😊
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Thanx for your coveted comment,much needed
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The one who creates…..destroys..isnt this a mystery…may be… to balance….could be…
Beautiful
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Thanks for your kind comments
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A good thought on Natures fury and specified poetically in a
Brilliantway
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THANKS
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Exceptionally well articulated. Very catchy description of the dull and gloomy moon warning about the Tsunami. ‘I felt the doom and gloom of Tsunami Tsunami’ creates an everlasting effect in the mind!
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Thanks Rishab for your excellent comment.after a long time
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so well crafted poem sir
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Thanks Vaibhaw ji .It is pleasure you liked my bit of contribution
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This is great 🙂 Very creepy and atmospheric 🙂
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Thanks great .Iappreciate very much.
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