From you there is nothing to hide
The world shall show you its every side.
As you grow in age
You’ll understand life’s every page.
Full of jealousy,full of rage,
There is little to laugh
And more to weep.
Enjoy ,enjoy
My lovely boy
But be wise and strong ,
Otherwise ,the world may teach you things wrong.
Brij kaul ji lovely and practical words in your poem. world is strange only experience in life make one to understand the truth. Realy enjoyed every depth of its meaning. looking forward more write ups.
Enjoy counting your notes Rs500 and 1000.
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Thanks sirjiFor your comments
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LOVELY POEM, ENJOYED EVERY WORD . VERY TRUE AND PRACTICAL. Every stage in life is great experience. Handle it with care and enjoy every moment , this only gives pleasure. Looking forward for your more interesting posts.
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Lovely Poem I really felt it ! Who do you dedicate it to???
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I dedicate it to my grandchildren and all the ones of this lovely world.
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i dedicate it to my grandchildren and the lovely ones of this world
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I wrote this sometime back…
When you are feeling sad and low
And you feel live is going slow
Think about your beautiful past
And make the memories last
Think of all the joys and tears
And let them oil your life’s gears
Think of the love you always had
And remember it was never bad
Think of all what you have now
And let it be your life’s plough
So move ahead in live
And remember the best way to thrive
Thank the Lord for all everything
And thank for all the joys that it can bring
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Thanks Naina. your poem is very enthralling.
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Beautiful one..yes the life does show us its highs and lows..as u say..we need to be strong…so we should.
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Thanks for your brilliant comments
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Lovely! poem Sir. Very true , the world will show it’s every side. Nothing is permanent in life, good times as well as bad times. All we must do is enjoy every bit of life that we get, after all the journey is more interesting than the destination.
Beautifully written too, it echoes in the mind.
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Thanks Rishab,your comments are always like a whiff of air to cool the countenance.
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Beautiful words. The lines in the poem with resonance tells a lot about the way of living ones life.
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Thanks Satyam for your great comments ,
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Good one.
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Thanx
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